Saw the moon sinking in clouds that night
when sky *whispered* the good news of triumph
with the defeat of that person
i saw the glowing face of the winner
*Lust* was about to *extinguish*
and his cause was astir to *flourish*
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12 comments:
this was really nice :D
Good stuff!
Furee : It is so sweet that you liked my post :)
Sara: tum se to umeed ki he nahi ja sakti k meri post ki burai karo :P
Few words yet a lot said.
Great impact!
Now ya to ziyadati haii :)
I get inspiration for poetry from you tarunima :)
oh realy nice poetry:)
Fahad i am here to thank you for thinking so highly of my blog:))
I read your comment on hamzas blog:)
Thanks!
:)
Thanks aisha and tarunima :)
*Lust* was about to *extinguish*
and his cause was astir to *flourish*
I can relate !
And once again the use of word 'triumph' catches my attention. When you use a word so much_no matter in what condition you are in _ you're gonna triumph ultimately !
Expressed something same here :
http://sadafhafeez.blogspot.com/2011/12/loyality.html
Cheers ! :)
I ask for forgiveness sadaf :P I had a mistake. Next time you won't see such words :P
:D
Oh I was appreciating the your use of positive words !
Fortunately, you didn't a fantastic job in reminding me of my mistakes.
Keep it up dude :)
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