Our first 'confrontation' !



I might, i might struggled to convince .. 
But now forthwith, you stutter in front of the silence of mine .. 
That night, that night you were rising .. 
Today, today you're screaming for rescue..

7 comments:

tarunima said...

It has an impact...great words

Furree Katt said...

oooh. dark!

fatima said...

precise!

-Fahad Naeem- said...

tarunima .. It's a source of motivation in poetry when you praise me :) Thank you

Furree .. dark for whom ? :P

fatima .. I always tried to be precised but couldn't get to that

Zeba said...

Hmmm... This one I really like.

Aasiyah said...

the inevitable rise and fall of the arrogant. how i love when they crumble (i know that sounds cruel).

-Fahad Naeem- said...

Zeba .. thank you ..

aasiyah .. yeah was expecting the same from you ^_^