Whisper ..





Saw the moon sinking in clouds that night
when sky *whispered* the good news of triumph
                                           
   with the defeat of that person
i saw the glowing face of the winner

*Lust* was about to *extinguish*
and his cause was astir to *flourish*

12 comments:

Furree Katt said...

this was really nice :D

Felicity said...

Good stuff!

Fahad said...

Furee : It is so sweet that you liked my post :)

Sara: tum se to umeed ki he nahi ja sakti k meri post ki burai karo :P

tarunima said...

Few words yet a lot said.
Great impact!

Fahad said...

Now ya to ziyadati haii :)

I get inspiration for poetry from you tarunima :)

Aisha said...

oh realy nice poetry:)

tarunima said...

Fahad i am here to thank you for thinking so highly of my blog:))
I read your comment on hamzas blog:)
Thanks!
:)

Fahad said...

Thanks aisha and tarunima :)

Sadaf Hafeez said...

*Lust* was about to *extinguish*
and his cause was astir to *flourish*

I can relate !
And once again the use of word 'triumph' catches my attention. When you use a word so much_no matter in what condition you are in _ you're gonna triumph ultimately !

Expressed something same here :

http://sadafhafeez.blogspot.com/2011/12/loyality.html

Cheers ! :)

-Fahad Naeem- said...

I ask for forgiveness sadaf :P I had a mistake. Next time you won't see such words :P

Sadaf Hafeez said...

:D

Oh I was appreciating the your use of positive words !

-Fahad Naeem- said...

Fortunately, you didn't a fantastic job in reminding me of my mistakes.
Keep it up dude :)